Делюсь прикольным штуками

Недавно мне что-то прилетело в голову и я решила начать пробывать писать стихи, потому что поняла, что меня никто не остановит >:). So, я решила загрузить сюда вот это, потому что мне кажется, что получилось круто. Я впервые публикую что-то подобное, поэтому будет интересна ваша реакция, всем спасибо! (btw, текст на английском, потому что моя учительница по иностранным языкам держит меня в подвале) If you weren't alive, I would think it's god's joke, Bottomless eyes, almost make me misspoke, You're woven from the sun by the love of gods, When I can't see you, it's like the sky is covered by clouds, My little feelings would die, if you disappeared, Alone in this dark cage, I would have been killed, I open my chest just to tear out my heart, And give it to you in case you were hurt. I begged you to glance at me at least by once, So I would have known that I still stand a chance, I won't live a day without an exquisite agony, This is why for me your voice is harmony, I'd never forget the second I realised, That with all your grace traits I'm hipnotised, We're not designed to be in the same place, indeed But who would have known an Atlant would fall for Caryatid. You're a work of art, which I wish was made up by me, But both of us know I would fracture the spine of this simphony, And in the end the marble flesh have to turn back into stone, Pygmalion and Galatea are separated and alone.